Fight... or flight?

Name: Ellie Thyssen
Species: vampire
Age: appears to be 17 but is really 294
Height: 5'6"
*Weight: 123lbs
Other notes about your appearance: short blonde hair, blue eyes wears contact lenses.
*Parents: both dead
Abilities: she is very strong and fast
Weapons: bow and arrow
Powers: strength and speed
Flaws: she is very alergic to different types of plants in the garlic family. She is also unable to be near water or her steps bind up.
Role-play: Ellie looked around the dark wooded area, her breathing fast and shallow. Her parents were just killed, both of them, along with her little sister, leaving her alone in the trees without anything but the cloths on her back and a bow and arrow to big for her. The young vampire trembled as a strange creature flew over head, but it didn't seem to hear or see her as she cowered beneath it, 'I'm gonna die. I'm gonna die' she thought as she shut her eyes, eventually falling asleep.
*Personality: Suspisious of everything and everyone, this vamp is to cautious for her won good. Most of the time she is very serious, but once on her good side she opens up.
*Notes on your characters: She has issues with trust.

Great! She just needs a couple more flaws, preferably in her personality. Around 5 flaws.

HAY she can be friends with my charrie!

How about for her flaws along with the allergies and the water issue she has troubles showing her emotions, she is absolutely terrified to be in woods without someone with her and she doesn't trust many people simply because someone betrayed her family and left her for dead, er, undead.

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