My first character

Name: Michell Solor
Species: Werecat
Age: 15
Height: 4'2
*Weight: 89
Other notes about your appearance: brown hair blue eyes and somewhat muscular.
*Parents: Na
Abilities: cat shifter
Weapons: sword.
Powers: shifts into a cat
Flaws: starved herself and cuts. She is also timid and shy.
Role-play: I ran forward very faster. Quickly, I shifted. "Maria!" I called out, expecting, like, twenty replys. But it was only one Maria I was talking about. I needed to save her very badly...
*Personality:

Good form, but there's just a few things that need fixed.
-There should be at least three flaws, they don't have to be huge things, but they should be flaws, like everyone has. Here's some examples: shy, rude, trips a lot, breaks bones easily, not very intelligent, etc.
-Role-play means an example of how you would RP with this character. It should be around 5 sentences long. For example: Soandso flew through the clouds, looking down at all the people and laughed. (only longer).

She'll probably be on latter, were we live it's 7 right now, she'll be on at about 9.

Accepted.