solar wind

by vangard the dragon tamer Sat Oct 01, 2011 9:03 pm

Name:solar wind
Species:Eastern wind Dragon
Age:19
Height:20 feet
*Weight:1000 lb
Other notes about your appearance: black and gold scales w/ gray hons and wings and it has a knife like point on its tell that is very sharp and its length is 3'.
*Parents:unknown
Abilities:can fly as fast as a jet or faster
Weapons:its tell, claws, and teeth
Powers:controls the winds,but he is still learning to control it and if he dose too much he gets so tired he has to sleep.
Flaws:it things that its the most powerful thing in the sky, doesn't realize his own boundries, and has a fiery temper.
Role-play: "I soar through the sky, the clouds parting around me. Everything down below is so small. I feel so free, so powerful. I'm over all- and I know it. I land heavily down on a cliff, the dust coming up around me. I look down on the valley. I am all powerful."
*Personality:calm and exploitative
*Notes on your characters:Cannot even imagine life without flight. likes to be called solor.

by **Pandorica** Sat Oct 01, 2011 9:10 pm

Your role play needs to be a five sentence example of role play. Example: I soar through the clouds, feeling the wind all around me. The sky is so large, and everything down below is so small. (But 5 sentences.)
Also, it's a little too powerful. Maybe tone down the powers or less abilities or such. Maybe another flaw. Other than that it's good.